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i am 35 years old, hold a Bachelor Degree in Natural Sciences in 1997 from the University of Dhaka Bangladesh, main subjects Chemistry, Zoology, and Statistics which is also recognized as a University degree in Germany.
After completing a Bachelor dive into practical life started as a self employed tutor, thought to the children from seven to sixteen years old different subjects like English, science etc.
I went to Dubai in 2001, worked there in various Industries ranging from assembly line to quality assurance therefore my English language has more developed. I have been living in Germany since 2006, participated two German language courses “Integrationskurs” eight months and one year “Sprache und Beruf”. After took part in these language courses I have also very good command over German language.
After completing a Bachelor dive into practical life started as a self employed tutor, thought to the children from seven to sixteen years old different subjects like English, science etc.
I went to Dubai in 2001, worked there in various Industries ranging from assembly line to quality assurance therefore my English language has more developed. I have been living in Germany since 2006, participated two German language courses “Integrationskurs” eight months and one year “Sprache und Beruf”. After took part in these language courses I have also very good command over German language.
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Hi; I have highlighted some areas that need correction, and also made some suggestions. i am 35 years old, and hold a Bachelor Degree in Natural Sciences ( 1997 ) from the University of Dhaka Bangladesh, in which my main subjects were Chemistry, Zoology, and Statistics . This is also recognized as a University degree in Germany.
- Hi; I have highlighted some areas that need correction, and also made some suggestions.
- i am 35 years old, and hold a Bachelor Degree in Natural Sciences ( 1997 ) from the University of Dhaka Bangladesh, in which my main subjects were Chemistry, Zoology, and Statistics .
- This is also recognized as a University degree in Germany.
- After completing a Bachelor dive into practical life started as a self-employed tutor, thought to the children from seven to sixteen years old different subjects like English, science etc.
- I went to Dubai in 2001, worked there in various Industries ranging from assembly line to quality assurance ; therefore I developed a command of English language has more developed .
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Hi; I have highlighted some areas that need correction, and also made some suggestions.
i am 35 years old, and hold a Bachelor Degree in Natural Sciences (1997) from the University of Dhaka Bangladesh, in which my main subjects were Chemistry, Zoology, and Statistics. This is also recognized as a Un
i am 35 years old, and hold a Bachelor Degree in Natural Sciences (1997) from the University of Dhaka Bangladesh, in which my main subjects were Chemistry, Zoology, and Statistics. This is also recognized as a Un
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i am 35 years old, hold a Bachelor Degree in Natural Sciences in 1997 from the University of Dhake Bangladesh main subjects Chemistry, Zoology, and Statistics which is also recognized as a University degree in Germany.
After completing a Bachelor dive into practical life started as a self employed tutor, had thought to the children from seven to sixteen years old different subjects like
After completing a Bachelor dive into practical life started as a self employed tutor, had thought to the children from seven to sixteen years old different subjects like
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"AlpheccaStars"] thank you for the correction, however i did not understand these yellow marking
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