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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Please help me correct for a review. I don't know how to say one sentence. I think I've gotten my point across but how would you correctly convey the thought?
The "find you friend" application for Iphone allows you to track your friends whereabouts. The only thing wrong with this application is it's not up to the minute/it's not in real time. If your friend was at home and left, the app might still tell you they are at home and only later tell you that they've left.
Thank you in advance
The "find you friend" application for Iphone allows you to track your friends whereabouts. The only thing wrong with this application is it's not up to the minute/it's not in real time. If your friend was at home and left, the app might still tell you they are at home and only later tell you that they've left.
Thank you in advance
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I have underlined some problems: The "find you friend" application for Iphone allows you to track your friends whereabouts. The only thing wrong with this application is it's not up to the minute/it's not in real time. If your friend was at home and left, the app might still tell you they are at home and only later tell you that they've left.
- I have underlined some problems: The "find you friend" application for Iphone allows you to track your friends whereabouts.
- The only thing wrong with this application is it's not up to the minute/it's not in real time.
- If your friend was at home and left, the app might still tell you they are at home and only later tell you that they've left.
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I have underlined some problems:
The "find you friend" application for Iphone allows you to track your friends whereabouts. The only thing wrong with this application is it's not up to the minute/it's not in real time. If your friend was at home and left, the app might still tell you they are at home and only later tell you that they've lef
The "find you friend" application for Iphone allows you to track your friends whereabouts. The only thing wrong with this application is it's not up to the minute/it's not in real time. If your friend was at home and left, the app might still tell you they are at home and only later tell you that they've lef
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