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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance

Please correction the sentence.

My educational background as well as the below skills and experience during last twelve years through which I have hands on experience in project monitoring, supervision and implementing making. That is why I think myself an ideal candidate for this position.
  

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Your first sentence has some errors, is incomplete, and contains too much information. I suggest this approach. I think myself an ideal candidate for this position because of my educational background as well as my skills and experience.

  • Your first sentence has some errors, is incomplete, and contains too much information.
  • I suggest this approach.
  • I think myself an ideal candidate for this position because of my educational background as well as my skills and experience.
  • For the last twelve years I have had hands-on experience in project monitoring, supervision and implementation.
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Your first sentence has some errors, is incomplete, and contains too much information.
I suggest this approach.

I think myself an ideal candidate for this position because of my educational background as well as my skills and experience. For the last twelve years I have had hands-on ex

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