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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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The book is a little hard to understand at first because many words are newly for me but it amazes me when I understand what every word she written means. Her describing is masterly and the fact is short but also hides answers of the book. The plot and the vocabulary are complex and many hint at things such as Gabriel killed his brother. This book is about fury, grief, lifelessness, failed bargain, dramatic, heartbreaking, and worrying, suspense and thriller. Surrender is some kind of book that many questions often raise while reading and the readers have a lot of thinking about ending. The book is slowly reveals more details about Gabriel’s past and his horrifying secrets and keep you guessing until the very end then leaves many unanswered questions. The most interesting question is does Finniga and Gabriel exist or just each other’s imagination. The author seems capable for writing book about damaged children and make me feel extremely impressed, love them ,understand them and especially at the climax will also readers feel sorry for them.I would recommend Surrender to high- schooler who fancies a dark, horrible and psychological thriller novel. I would rate 8/10.
  

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Anon: I have some suggestions below to help you improve your text. Anonymous The book is a little hard to understand at first because many words are new for me but it amazes me when I understand what every word she has written means. Her describing is descriptions are master ful l y and the fact (?

  • Anon: I have some suggestions below to help you improve your text.
  • Anonymous The book is a little hard to understand at first because many words are new for me but it amazes me when I understand what every word she has written means.
  • Her describing is descriptions are master ful l y and the fact (?
  • ) also hides answers of the book.
  • The plot and the vocabulary are complex and there are many hint s at things such as (how / why)?
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Anon:
I have some suggestions below to help you improve your text.
AnonymousThe book is a little hard to understand at first because many words are new for me but it amazes me when I understand what every word she has written means. Her describing is descriptions are masterful ly and the fact
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thank you so much , thanks a lot

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