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Son James Posted 13 years ago
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* I hope you correct wrong parts in the following writing. Thank you in advance for your teaching.
I made my daughter cried a lot yesterday. She put out so many toys to play from her selves. Even though it almost became 10 and half pm, she never tried to stop playing with toys. She even asked me to put out another toy on the top of another selves she couldn't catch herself.
Ah! It was the time that she should get sleep.
I had some of her clothes to fold up and put the closet. I shouted and threatened her, "If you don't rearrange put all of the toys in the right places, I will go downstairs. You have to stay alone here!"
Even though I threatened her like this more than 3 times, she refused to organize toys. Just crying and imitating vomiting. ( I think she thinks if she try to imitate vomit, her father can be kind man. When she was sick, I never refuse her requirement, I did my best to take care of her. She keep this in her memory)
I shouted her a lot and tried to go downstairs to threaten her. After a little time went by, I realized my self that I was so angry on 3 things.
It would take 1 hour to organize toys she put in confusion in my room. Furthermore, I need to do something before getting sleep. The last thing is that she didn't follow what I said. It made me get angry more and more.
What would I do? I thought I knew I was angry on toys in disarrangement, not on her. I decided to erase my anger and would arrange her toys myself tomorrow while she is in the kindergarten.
Since I get such thought, I started to feel sorry to her. I'm not a good father. Sometimes my wife uses threat to follow her what she said. I complained her about it. But yesterday I used it.
What a poor my daughter. Threatening your baby is not a good educational way. I'm worried on whether yesterday's incident can influences her mental statue. Today I want to play with her with her toys.
  
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