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Son James Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Please correct wong things in my writting

People usually use the words they have learned and indicated from schools and news on T.V unconsciously.
But you have to know the words and the terms we call a part of language really deeply influence your unconsciousness.
You have used the words "the multicultural family" which did not exist a few years ago.
They have made these words in order to distinguish from Korean pure blood families.
You should recognize using the words can be considered to be main culprit behind the fact there becomes a new social class today.
Because people can easily recall images of the criminals, the neglected, the needy that news these days on our broadcasts so often have made issues and connected these images to these words.
Yes! Like when I say "an apple", you can image the shape of an apple in your head.
Yes! Like the words "His Majesty" and "My lord" became an external standard of distinguishing "King" and "Retainer" or "Master" and "Slave"
Sometimes our linguists and governors needs to get a deep consideration on what effect the new words have to people's awareness and consciences.
before inventing and deciding new words for administrative convenient or something.
  

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This is the best I could find, Son James, but I may be wrong. Maybe it would be better to wait for more opinions, yet here you've got a head-up: People usually use the words they have learned (I think "indicated" makes no sense and is unnecessary here) in schools and news on TV unconsciously. But you have to know that (I think it sounds better) the words and the terms we call a part of language actually (I think it sounds better) deeply influence your unconsciousness.

  • This is the best I could find, Son James, but I may be wrong.
  • Maybe it would be better to wait for more opinions, yet here you've got a head-up: People usually use the words they have learned (I think "indicated" makes no sense and is unnecessary here) in schools and news on TV unconsciously.
  • But you have to know that (I think it sounds better) the words and the terms we call a part of language actually (I think it sounds better) deeply influence your unconsciousness.
  • You use the expression " ( the) multicultural family" , which did not exist a few years ago.
  • They have created this expression in order to distinguish from Korean pure blood families.
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This is the best I could find, Son James, but I may be wrong. Maybe it would be better to wait for more opinions, yet here you've got a head-up:

People usually use the words they have learned (I think "indicated" makes no sense and is unnecessary here) in schools and news on TV unconsciousl
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Thank you so much for your teaching,Mr.Guedes. It is very helpful for me to learn English. By the way, Could you understand what I said in my writing? Thank you in advance for your additional answer.
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Some things I could, but the essencial was understandable. As you can see, your mistakes were mostly grammatical.
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I'm worried about the other people can understand the meaning of my writing or not. Thank you so much for your confirmation,Mr.Guedes

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