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The cargo delivery date is required on the first date from the shipment window for ABC shipment. The second day is late and caused penalty. Therefore, the inspection should be performed by Oct 09 if the shipment window is 10-14 Oct. Please stick to this schedule in your future shipment.
  

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The required cargo delivery date is the first date in the shipment window for ABC shipment. The second day is late and draws a penalty. Therefore, the inspection should be performed by October 9th if the shipment window is 10-14 October.

  • The required cargo delivery date is the first date in the shipment window for ABC shipment.
  • The second day is late and draws a penalty.
  • Therefore, the inspection should be performed by October 9th if the shipment window is 10-14 October.
  • Please stick to this schedule in your future shipment.
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The required cargo delivery date is the first date in the shipment window for ABC shipment. The second day is late and draws a penalty. Therefore, the inspection should be performed by October 9th if the shipment window is 10-14 October. Please stick to this schedule in your future shipment.

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