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Dhar Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

please correct ths letter wrong sentences

I have to attend my Mother’s first death anniversary on 31st Jan, due to some impartment arrangements to arrange. (religious formalities) These all should be with my hades as a son then only her sole will be rest in Pease, we strongly believe. In our families it’s very important part of originate
In my situation I’m not able to go for the financial condition. But I should go, otherwise in my life long I feel to cry.
Sir I hope you can understand my situation, please permit me for 10 days, I never forget yours kind help,
With your permeation I have to arrange my flight ticket on 27 Jan. Honestly I request you sir pls. favor for me
  

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I suggest this simplification. On January 31 I need to attend an gathering honoring the first anniversary of my mother's death, an even that is very important to my family and in our religion. I am asking for permission to be gone for ten days, beginning January 27.

— Philip

  • I suggest this simplification.
  • On January 31 I need to attend an gathering honoring the first anniversary of my mother's death, an even that is very important to my family and in our religion.
  • I am asking for permission to be gone for ten days, beginning January 27.
  • I thank you for your kind consideration.
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I suggest this simplification. On January 31 I need to attend an gathering honoring the first anniversary of my mother's death, an even that is very important to my family and in our religion. I am asking for permission to be gone for ten days, beginning January 27. I thank you for your kind consideration.
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