Please correct this urgent motivation letter

0I am so sorry to bother you once, but please help me.02br
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00I have to wirte this motivatin letter and send it tomorrow, could anybody be so kind as to correct my mistakes?02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00My name is xx I am a 17 year old boy in 1201sup^{00th02sup}00 grade in a grammar school in xx00. 00 02br
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00Hereby I apply at your university for the degree programme biotechnology.02br
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00My interest in medical progress 00was 00aroused00 by00 00my parents who both work as nurses.02br
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00I am a person with a huge perseverance level, someone who is motivated, ambitious and have the ability to work under pressure.. I can say I am an independent team player, very flexible00 and interested in science especially in biology00. So I have good conditions to be a hard working student. 02br
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00One of my priorities is to study00 at a university which connects economical aspects like managements processes with natural science; and so I think that the XX is one of the best faculties at which to study Biotechnology. The practice- oriented education and the lectures in English which will help me when entering the job market are also reasons for my decision to apply to your university. 02br
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00Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I hope that you will be persuaded of my potential and I look forward to hearing from you. 02br
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00Yours sincerely02br
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00XXX02br
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