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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Please correct this short email
Hi, I'm gonna send this email to some oil companies, but I want to make sure that it sound clear and that is correct. I'd like to use the words I came up with, IF possible and I don't want to make any mistake in the structure. This is the text:
I’m looking for employment in the energy production and distribution field and/or in the environment protection field. I’m Italian mother-language and having lived in the for more than 4 years, I speak good English; I enclosed my resume in the attachment. If in order to work in these fields, it is necessary to be in possession of certificates that at this moment I don’t have, I’m willing to attend courses that issue the required certificates. You can contact me at anytime to talk to me and eventually set up an interview.
Thank you very very much teachers.
I’m looking for employment in the energy production and distribution field and/or in the environment protection field. I’m Italian mother-language and having lived in the for more than 4 years, I speak good English; I enclosed my resume in the attachment. If in order to work in these fields, it is necessary to be in possession of certificates that at this moment I don’t have, I’m willing to attend courses that issue the required certificates. You can contact me at anytime to talk to me and eventually set up an interview.
Thank you very very much teachers.
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Anonymous Hi, I'm going to send this email to some oil companies, but I want to make sure that it sound clear and that is correct. I'd like to use the words I came up with, IF possible and I don't want to make any mistake in the structure. This is the text: I’m looking for employment in the energy production and distribution field and/or in the environment protection field.
- Anonymous Hi, I'm going to send this email to some oil companies, but I want to make sure that it sound clear and that is correct.
- I'd like to use the words I came up with, IF possible and I don't want to make any mistake in the structure.
- This is the text: I’m looking for employment in the energy production and distribution field and/or in the environment protection field.
- I’m Italian mother-language but having lived in the for more than 4 years, I speak good English; I enclosed my resume in the attachment .
- My resume is attached.
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AnonymousHi, I'm going to send this email to some oil companies, but I want to make sure that it sound clear and that is correct. I'd like to use the words I came up with, IF possible and I don't want to make any mistake in the structure. This is the text:
I’m looking for employment in the energy production and distribu
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Anonymous
Hi, I'm going to send this email to some oil companies, but I want to make sure that it sounds clear and that it is correct.
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Hi Feebs
I shall look forward to hearing from you.
Shouldn't it be 'Ishall look forward to hearing from you.' ?
Many thanks.
I shall look forward to hearing from you.
Shouldn't it be 'I
Many thanks.
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Feebs11AnonymousHi, I'm going to send this email to some oil companies, but I want to make sure that it sound clear and that is correct. I'd like to use the words I came up with, IF possible and I don't want to make any mistake in the structure. This is the text:
I’m looking for employment in th
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I agree with Amy.
I can be contacted at any time at (AmE) / on (BrE) 12345678 or by e-mail.
I've never seen 'I shall look forward to hearing from you' in any British English letter writing book that I've read until Feebs told me it is fine.
I can be contacted at any time at (AmE) / on (BrE) 12345678 or by e-mail.
I've never seen 'I shall look forward to hearing from you' in any British English letter writing book that I've read until Feebs told me it is fine.
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