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Mezzopiano Posted 8 years ago
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Please correct this sentence for me. (racial behaviors)

In this study, the method was to observe the behaviors of customers in cafeteria, which was not done in previous studies concerning about racial behaviors.

  

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mezzopiano In this study, the method was to observe the behaviors behavior of customers in a/the cafeteria, which was not done in previous studies concerning about racial behaviors. behavior. You can't have both 'concerning' and 'about' like that.

— CalifJim

  • mezzopiano In this study, the method was to observe the behaviors behavior of customers in a/the cafeteria, which was not done in previous studies concerning about racial behaviors.
  • behavior.
  • You can't have both 'concerning' and 'about' like that.
  • I think you might even want 'on'.
  • concerning racial behavior / about racial behavior / on racial behavior In specialized fields of study the plural 'behaviors' is used, so depending on context, the plural might be OK in your sentence.
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In this study, the method was to observe the behaviors behavior of customers in a/the cafeteria, which was not done in previous studies concerning about racial behaviors. behavior.

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