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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Please correct this sentence for me

How would you correctly write this please?

The way one looks at a kid with Down's syndrome is worse than the look they would give to someone with autism. People are so rude when it comes to people with Down's.

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Anonymous The way one looks at a kid with Down's syndrome is worse than the look they would give to someone with autism. People are so rude when it comes to people with Down's. The problem is parallelism.

— CalifJim

  • Anonymous The way one looks at a kid with Down's syndrome is worse than the look they would give to someone with autism.
  • People are so rude when it comes to people with Down's.
  • The problem is parallelism.
  • Any of the following would solve that problem.
  • I prefer the third.
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AnonymousThe way one looks at a kid with Down's syndrome is worse than the look they would give to someone with autism. People are so rude when it comes to people with Down's.
The problem is parallelism. Any of the following would solve that problem. I prefer the third.

The way one looks at ...
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