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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct this sentence for me.
However thorough research of the Saipan island and it's current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job. Unless an increase in salary is compensated.
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Hi, However thorough research of the Saipan island and it's current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job. Unless an increase in salary is compensated. You need at least these edits.
- Hi, However thorough research of the Saipan island and it's current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job.
- Unless an increase in salary is compensated.
- You need at least these edits.
- However, thorough research of Saipan and its current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job, unless an increase in salary is offered as compensation.
- I would suggest that you should be more explicit about what the negative findings of your research are.
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Hi,
However thorough research of the Saipan island and it's current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job. Unless an increase in salary is compensated.
You need at least these edits.
However, thorough research of Saipan and its current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job, unless an increase in salary i
However thorough research of the Saipan island and it's current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job. Unless an increase in salary is compensated.
You need at least these edits.
However, thorough research of Saipan and its current economic and demographic status stops me from committing to this job, unless an increase in salary i
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