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Hasvi Posted 9 years ago
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I am going to give suggestion about our inter portal enhancement, please correct if this wrong:

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May I suggest that following points for our internal portal development:

  • The system should highlight the matching due date in our portal if it is already matching with previous schedule date under respecting Project manager’s title. It will help to project manager to adjust the date if they already blocked with another title.
  • We can set overview due date alert (small round circle chart with red color highlight) in respective project manager’s home page. All the due date info should be blink/highlight in respective schedule page. It will help to PM to get the alert of their own titles.
  • Once the title’s status has changed as completed that particular title info should be diappear from the home page, and move under completed status report
  

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— The system should highlight the due date if it already matches the previous schedule date under the project manager’s title. It will help the project managers adjust the date if they are already blocked with another title. We can set an overview due date alert (small round circle with red highlight) on the project manager’s homepage.

  • — The system should highlight the due date if it already matches the previous schedule date under the project manager’s title.
  • It will help the project managers adjust the date if they are already blocked with another title.
  • We can set an overview due date alert (small round circle with red highlight) on the project manager’s homepage.
  • All of the due date info should be highlighted on the schedule page.
  • It will help the PMs receive an alert for their own titles.
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May I suggest the following points for our internal portal development?—

The system should highlight the due date if it already matches the previous schedule date under the project manager’s title. It will help the project managers adjust the date if they are already blocked with another title.

We can set an overview due date alert (small round circle with red high

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