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Sudheer paniyur Posted 10 years ago
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I am Medicore Embedded Software engineer with 3 years of experience mine salary is too low 3.21 lakhper annum and i am not getting any interview what shall i do shall i do python automation course or python advance Please suggest me
  

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There are some capitalization and word choice problems but the easiest fix is to break this into smaller sentences. I would word it like this: I am a Medicore Embedded Software engineer with 3 years experience. 21 lakjh per annum, I am not getting any job interviews.

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  • There are some capitalization and word choice problems but the easiest fix is to break this into smaller sentences.
  • I would word it like this: I am a Medicore Embedded Software engineer with 3 years experience.
  • 21 lakjh per annum, I am not getting any job interviews.
  • What should I do?
  • Should I take the python automation course or the python advance course?
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There are some capitalization and word choice problems but the easiest fix is to break this into smaller sentences. I would word it like this:

I am a Medicore Embedded Software engineer with 3 years experience. Although I think my salary is too low, at 3.21 lakjh per annum, I am not getting any job interviews. What should I do? Should I take the python automation course or the
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"Python" is a programming language. As a proper noun it is capitalized.
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