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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct this sentence
Like Sirens who with their magic voices deceived stray sailors into being shipwrecked on the rocks of their island, my mind plays games with me, entices me, allures me, seduces me into believing that the dream still exists.
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Hi, I would just add these commas. Like Sirens who , with their magic voices , deceived stray sailors into being shipwrecked on the rocks of their island, my mind plays games with me, entices me, allures me, seduces me into believing that the dream still exists. Clive
- Hi, I would just add these commas.
- Like Sirens who , with their magic voices , deceived stray sailors into being shipwrecked on the rocks of their island, my mind plays games with me, entices me, allures me, seduces me into believing that the dream still exists.
- Clive
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Hi,
I would just add these commas.
Like Sirens who, with their magic voices, deceived stray sailors into being shipwrecked on the rocks of their island, my mind plays games with me, entices me, allures me
I would just add these commas.
Like Sirens who, with their magic voices, deceived stray sailors into being shipwrecked on the rocks of their island, my mind plays games with me, entices me, allures me
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