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Rsharma Posted 16 years ago
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Please correct this sentence

I just want to bring this under your notice that I have made nine prospect eversince we started the campaign. Out of these nine propects five had accepetd the webinar invitation and three procpects have attnded the Web-Ex meeting. As advised I have started preparing the call sheet with the conclusion and I will present it on every Monday.
  

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rsharma I just want to bring this under to your notice that I have made nine prospect s ever since we started the campaign. Out of these nine propects five had accepetd the webinar invitation and three procpects have attnded the Web-Ex meeting. As advised I have started preparing the call sheet with the conclusion and I will present it on every Monday.

— Philip

  • rsharma I just want to bring this under to your notice that I have made nine prospect s ever since we started the campaign.
  • Out of these nine propects five had accepetd the webinar invitation and three procpects have attnded the Web-Ex meeting.
  • As advised I have started preparing the call sheet with the conclusion and I will present it on every Monday.
  • I'm not sure if there is a good reason to have 'have attended' and 'had started' in different tenses.
  • It could be possible, however.
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rsharmaI just want to bring this under to your notice that I have made nine prospects ever since we started the campaign. Out of these nine propects five had accepetd the webinar invitation and three procpects have attnded the Web-Ex meeting. As advised I have started preparing the call sheet with the conclusion and I will
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