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Pametus Posted 13 years ago
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Please correct this sentece
I'm a Japanese student.
This sentence is from my essay.
"All the domains in Japan took supportive positions for either the shogunate or the Emperor."
I know that it doesn't make sense, but I don't know how to write in another way. Would anyone give me a hand?
This sentence is from my essay.
"All the domains in Japan took supportive positions for either the shogunate or the Emperor."
I know that it doesn't make sense, but I don't know how to write in another way. Would anyone give me a hand?
Top answer
This is fine: All the daimyos in Japan took supportive positions for either the shogunate or the Emperor. Here is a suggestion: The loyalty of the daimyos was divided between the shogunate and the Emperor.
- This is fine: All the daimyos in Japan took supportive positions for either the shogunate or the Emperor.
- Here is a suggestion: The loyalty of the daimyos was divided between the shogunate and the Emperor.
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This is fine:
All the daimyos in Japan took supportive positions for either the shogunate or the Emperor.
Here is a suggestion:
The loyalty of the daimyos was divided between the shogunate and the Emperor.
All the daimyos in Japan took supportive positions for either the shogunate or the Emperor.
Here is a suggestion:
The loyalty of the daimyos was divided between the shogunate and the Emperor.
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