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Mgwattoo Posted 11 years ago
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Please correct this scentence

It is very evident that Pakistan film industry was and is connected to Indian film industry on various levels.

please let me know if this sentence is correct.
  

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mgwattoo It is very evident that Pakistan film industry was and is connected to Indian film industry on various levels. It is very evident that the Pakistan i film industry was and is connected to the Indian film industry on various levels. mgwattoo p lease let me know if this sentence is correct.

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  • mgwattoo It is very evident that Pakistan film industry was and is connected to Indian film industry on various levels.
  • It is very evident that the Pakistan i film industry was and is connected to the Indian film industry on various levels.
  • mgwattoo p lease let me know if this sentence is correct.
  • P lease let me know if this sentence is correct.
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mgwattooIt is very evident that Pakistan film industry was and is connected to Indian film industry on various levels.
It is very evident that the Pakistani film industry was and is connected to the Indian film industry on various levels.
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It is largely correct. You just missed a couple of articles:

It is very evident that the Pakistan film industry was and is connected to the Indian film industry on various levels.
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mgwattoo It is very evident that the Pakistani film industry was and (still) is connected to the Indian film industry on various levels.
Consider saying:
It is very evident that the Pakistani film industry was and (still) is connected to its Indian counterpart on various levels.
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It is very evident that the film industries of Pakistan and India have been and continue to be connected on various levels.
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