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Sameer666 Posted 12 years ago
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Please correct this paragraph

The XYZ is a database application; it relies heavily on background technologies: Servers, Network, and Databases. This document accentuates the considerations to improve XYZ application’s scalability, recoverability, availability and performance in contextualized technologies.
  

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Don't use the semicolon there (because of the upcoming colon). The XYZ is a database applicatio n. It relies heavily on background technologies: servers, networks, and databases .

— Mister Micawber

  • Don't use the semicolon there (because of the upcoming colon).
  • The XYZ is a database applicatio n.
  • It relies heavily on background technologies: servers, networks, and databases .
  • This document emphasizes the considerations for improving XYZ application’s scalability, recoverability, availability and performance in contextualized technologies.
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Don't use the semicolon there (because of the upcoming colon).

The XYZ is a database application. It relies heavily on background technologies: servers, networks, and databases. This document emphasizes the considerations for improving XYZ application’s scalability, recoverability, availability and performance in contextualized technologies.
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Many thanks.
Mister MicawberThe XYZ is a database application. It relies heavily on background technologies: servers, networks, and databases
Can I write: The XYZ is a database application. It relies heavily on background technologies: network, servers, and databases.

why use emphasizes instead of accentuates.(
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sameer666Can I write: The XYZ is a database application. It relies heavily on background technologies: network, servers, and databases.
You can. I expect that 'networks' is more appropriate as a general term.
sameer666why use emphasizes instead of accentuates
For me, 'accentuates' has more to do with makeup, fashion, cuisin
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Thanks again. Do you rate the paragraph well written ? or it should be improved.
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I have shown you my suggestions for improvement in my first post.
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