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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
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Please correct this paragraph

I woke up at 6 o'clock in the morning, and immediately got up from the bed and went directly to the toilet room. After everything is over there, I went to bath taking off my dress. After everything is over there, I was back to eat breakfast. After breakfast is finished, I went college with heavy bag on my back. After I returned back, I did my lunch and sat in front of the computer and opened forum's site. From then, still I am sitting in front of the computer.

Please correct my sentences.
  

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I woke up at 6 o'clock in the morning, and immediately got up and went to the bathroom . Then I ate breakfast. After breakfast, I went to college with my heavy bag on my back.

— Mister Micawber

  • I woke up at 6 o'clock in the morning, and immediately got up and went to the bathroom .
  • Then I ate breakfast.
  • After breakfast, I went to college with my heavy bag on my back.
  • When I returned , I had my lunch , then sat in front of the computer and opened this forum's site.
  • Now I am sitting in front of the computer .
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I woke up at 6 o'clock in the morning, and immediately got up and went to the bathroom. Then I ate breakfast. After breakfast, I went to college with my heavy bag on my back. When I returned, I had my lunch, then sat in front of the computer and opened this forum's site. Now I am sitting in front of the computer.
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