Please correct this long message
This is written to my piano teacher. It doesn't need to be too formal. Please correct it such that it sounds more natural and coherent. Thank you.
I’m sorry for the thing last week. Last Friday, I did not hear anything from you that evening, so I assumed I was not going there. I just change the schedule with the grad student who I am working with from 1-5 to 10 to 14 that particular Friday because we have something that need to be done early before we move on to the next step of the experiment. But it’s a voluntary job so technically I can come whatever I want.
Thank you for texting me about the schedule last Friday. I was on the way heading to the bus stop, so if you emailed me, I would be on the bus knowing I was not going.
If that’s just a normal run through in the classroom, I prefer doing it next week. Because I just got your feedback on Wednesday, I didn’t have time to practice to correct all, so It’s kinda pointless to meet on Friday. On top of that, you are done with 9 lessons, I don’t want to take any of your time
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This is much to long if you're just saying you can't have a lesson on Friday. It should be something like the following, for example: "I'm sorry I had to cancel my lesson last Friday. "
- This is much to long if you're just saying you can't have a lesson on Friday.
- It should be something like the following, for example: "I'm sorry I had to cancel my lesson last Friday.
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This is much to long if you're just saying you can't have a lesson on Friday. It should be something like the following, for example:
"I'm sorry I had to cancel my lesson last Friday. And this Friday is going to have to be another cancellation because of my schedule at school."
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