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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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00 Dear Sir, 02 br
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00 I was delighted to be asked by Mr. John Doe to write a recommendation for him in his attempt to gain admission to your school. I have heard only good things about your school and quality programs you offer. I sincerely wish you will continue to progress further and become one of the great institutions in the country. 02 br
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00 As to Mr. Doe, while he was in our institute, he exhibited great interest in the studies he was pursuing (undertaking??) and achieved high marks in most of his courses as the attached copy of his transcript shows. He is known to stay up late at nights and take his scholastic endeavors seriously. Not only did he pursue his studies with great vigor, he was a Varsity tennis player for our school in his junior and senior years. He was a valued member of our tennis team, which has won many competitions in the past, the latest one being the winner of the 2001 City Championship. 02 br
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00 I feel his (him??) being a well-rounded person, excelling in both academic and athletic areas of his life, makes him a very strong candidate for your school, and he deserves to be given a serious consideration by the reviewing committee. He has shown to us that he is a special person great potential, and I feel strongly that a school like you can provide him with the firm foundation and supporting environment he needs to fully grow and fulfill (reach??) his pontential. 02 br
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00 If you have any questions on this candidate, Please do not hesitate to contact me. 02 br
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00 Yours truly, 02 br
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00 Dear Sir, 02 br
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00 I was delighted to be asked by Mr. John Doe to write a recommendation for him in his attempt to gain admission to your school. I have heard only good things about your school and quality programs you offer. I sincerely wish you will continue to progress further and become one of the great institutions in the country. 02 br
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00 As to Mr. Doe, while he was in our institute, he exhibited great interest in the studies he was pursuing (undertaking??) and achieved high marks in most of his courses as the attached copy of his transcript shows. He is known to stay up late at nights and take his scholastic endeavors seriously. Not only did he pursue his studies with great vigor, he was a Varsity tennis player for our school in his junior and senior years. He was a valued member of our tennis team, which has won many competitions in the past, the latest one being the winner of the 2001 City Championship. 02 br
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00 I feel his (him??) being a well-rounded person, excelling in both academic and athletic areas of his life, makes him a very strong candidate for your school, and he deserves to be given a serious consideration by the reviewing committee. He has shown to us that he is a special person great potential, and I feel strongly that a school like you can provide him with the firm foundation and supporting environment he needs to fully grow and fulfill (reach??) his pontential. 02 br
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00 If you have any questions on this candidate, Please do not hesitate to contact me. 02 br
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00 Yours truly, 02 br
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00 ZZZ 0-
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0 I was delighted to be asked by Mr. John Doe to write a recommendation for him in his attempt to gain admission to your school. I have heard only good things about your school and quality programs you offer.
- 0 I was delighted to be asked by Mr.
- John Doe to write a recommendation for him in his attempt to gain admission to your school.
- I have heard only good things about your school and quality programs you offer.
- I sincerely wish you will continue to progress further and become one of the great institutions in the country.
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0 I was delighted to be asked by Mr. John Doe to write a recommendation for him in his attempt to gain admission to your school. I have heard only good things about your school and quality programs you offer. I sincerely wish you will continue to progress further and become one of the great institutions in the country. 02 br
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01 cite 10 Believer 12 cite 10 Hi, 12 br
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10 I was delighted to be asked by Mr. John Doe to write a recommendation for him in his attempt to gain admission to your school. I have heard only good things about your school and 11 font 10 the 12 font
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0 Thank you, Feebs11 and Doll for thorough correction -- I hope for more of your help in the future. 0-
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