0
Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Please correct this for me

Hi. Please correct this for me.

Yesterday I woke up with the/my iPhone on my stomach. It dropped on/to the floor and the screen broke.

- 'The' or 'my' - what is more commonly used?

- Is 'stomach' fine or is 'belly' or something else better?

- Is 'dropped' the best word here?

- 'On' or 'to'?

  

Top answer

Before: Yesterday I woke up with the/my iPhone on my stomach . It dropped on/to the floor and the screen broke. After: Yesterday I woke up with my iPhone on my stomach .

— Ann321

  • Before: Yesterday I woke up with the/my iPhone on my stomach .
  • It dropped on/to the floor and the screen broke.
  • After: Yesterday I woke up with my iPhone on my stomach .
  • As I [rolled over] [sat up] , it dropped on the floor ,and the screen broke.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0

Before:

Yesterday I woke up with the/my iPhone

0

Related Questions