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LomX Posted 16 years ago
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Please correct this for me.
Hi,
I'm Ardhika from indonesia and i would like a help from you guys to correct my english.
Here's the Sentence:
Currently, we only have 1 store, which is in the shopping centre. We have never had a website since the first time we are opened up our store. We once have decided to make a website, in order to make it easier for foreign customer to see what our products look like and then order it. But, the website didn’t provide any online order or online payment. Whenever, there was a change in the product or a new release product, we would just edit the contents inside the product or just add the specification, and sometimes, we wouldn’t be updated the website for a long time. It was inconvenient for both of our customers and us.
In, our retail store, we have some of our figures displayed on the display glass, so that our customer can see the figures before they buy it. The display also functions as an attraction to attract customer to come and buy it.
We are also selling other products, like PVC paint, paint brush in different size, PVC glue, in our retail store. Customers can visit our retail store if they don’t wish to wait for the delivery process. But, if the ordered item is out of stock, they have no other choice but to wait for the stock to come. For foreign customers, they can’t send their orders easily because they have to call to our customer serviced or send an e-mail to us.
Thank You,
Ardhika Kevala
I'm Ardhika from indonesia and i would like a help from you guys to correct my english.
Here's the Sentence:
Currently, we only have 1 store, which is in the shopping centre. We have never had a website since the first time we are opened up our store. We once have decided to make a website, in order to make it easier for foreign customer to see what our products look like and then order it. But, the website didn’t provide any online order or online payment. Whenever, there was a change in the product or a new release product, we would just edit the contents inside the product or just add the specification, and sometimes, we wouldn’t be updated the website for a long time. It was inconvenient for both of our customers and us.
In, our retail store, we have some of our figures displayed on the display glass, so that our customer can see the figures before they buy it. The display also functions as an attraction to attract customer to come and buy it.
We are also selling other products, like PVC paint, paint brush in different size, PVC glue, in our retail store. Customers can visit our retail store if they don’t wish to wait for the delivery process. But, if the ordered item is out of stock, they have no other choice but to wait for the stock to come. For foreign customers, they can’t send their orders easily because they have to call to our customer serviced or send an e-mail to us.
Thank You,
Ardhika Kevala
Top answer
We currently have one store, which is in the shopping centre. We have never had a website since the first time we opened up our store. We had once decided to make a website in order to make it easier for foreign customers to see what our products look like and then order them.
- We currently have one store, which is in the shopping centre.
- We have never had a website since the first time we opened up our store.
- We had once decided to make a website in order to make it easier for foreign customers to see what our products look like and then order them.
- But the website didn't provide any online ordering or payment system.
- Whenever there was a change in a product or a new product was to be launched, we would just edit the contents of the product or add into the specifications.
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We currently have one store, which is in the shopping centre. We have never had a website since the first time we opened up our store. We had once decided to make a website in order to make it easier for foreign customers to see what our products look like and then order them. But the website didn't provide any online ordering or payment system. Whenever there was a change in a product or a new p
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i have another question. please your help
As mentioned above, the system that we are currently running is really old-fashioned and very inconvenient for both customers and us. We had difficulties to satisfy our customer, because of the increasing demands from other countries’ customers.
We can’t fulfill our vision and mission if we can’t make a way to increase our popularity in
As mentioned above, the system that we are currently running is really old-fashioned and very inconvenient for both customers and us. We had difficulties to satisfy our customer, because of the increasing demands from other countries’ customers.
We can’t fulfill our vision and mission if we can’t make a way to increase our popularity in
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