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Believer Posted 20 years ago
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Please correct this e-mail.

Please correct the following. Feast is the made-up name of a restaurant.

Hi all,

This is Believer. How are you all doing? I hope you all are doing well.

Anyway, since Christmas is coming up soon fast, I was thinking that it might be good to meet and spend some quality friendly time together eating some delectable food being offered at Feast in Seoul. Feast serves a variety of sumptuous entrees ranging from Western style dishes to Oriental dishes. The Feast offers a group discount and if we can have at least 50 of our members attend the dinner meeting on Christmas Eve, we can have a ten-percent discount. I personally think that is nice and should try to take the discount if possible.

The day of the dinner and meeting is planned for Christmas Eve and the time is planned at 7 P.M.. If you don't have any transportation, we can certainly arrange something for you so you can join us.

If you think you can attend, please let me know before the deadline, which is December xx. Once I receive your e-mail saying that you are planning to attend, I will e-mail you back with information on where you should sent your reservation fee.

I think it will be a great thing for us have at the year end and hope to make it happen.

Sincerely,

Believer
  

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Hi all, This is Believer. How are you all doing? I hope you all are doing well.

  • Hi all, This is Believer.
  • How are you all doing?
  • I hope you all are doing well.
  • (you could also say 'I hope you are all well).
  • Anyway, since Christmas is coming up soon , I was thinking that it might would be good to meet up and spend some quality friendly time together as friends, eating some the delectable food being offered at Feast in Seoul.
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Hi all,

This is Believer. How are you all doing? I hope you all are doing well. (you could also say 'I hope you are all well).

Anyway, since Christmas is coming up soon, I was thinking that it might would be good to meet

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