Please correct this article for me. The title is "Some people like cooking and eating at home with their family. Other people like eating at restaurants. Discuss both view and give your opinion." Thank you so much!

Some people like to prepare food and they want to cook and eat at home with their family. While others prefer to eat at restaurants. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle they have. They like the convenience of eating out. I am in favor of the idea that cooking and eating by myself at home have more benefits.
There are several reasons why some people like eating out. Firstly, they are so busy with their works at present. Secondly, they can eat with their friends very often. Moreover, The chef in the restaurant cook very delicious and after finishing eat, they do not to clean the dishes. In other words, eating out regularly with friends can aid them bond and they will feel more comfortable after the stresses of work. However, The cost of eating out is often more expensive than at home. As a result, if they do not have enough time for cook themselves, eating out is the best choice.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more advantages for people to cook and eat at home with their family. Firstly, it can save amount of money if they do at home, the foods is cheaper. Secondly, their family will be closer together. It is clear, they can also control the over the ingredients for meals when cooking at home. The calories and fat are often low. In this way, they will have a healthier. They can learn cook in magazine or google, it is so convenient. But sometimes, they can cook fail.
For the reason mention above, it seems to me that if they have enough time, cooking and eating at home is more safe and good for their health.