Please correct this apologizing letter.

Dear Jake,

I'm Phuonng, a classmate of Agnes Ngoc Hue. I'll tell you a small talk that you have never imagined about that. One day, we saw Agnes ran after Dany to catch her diary . Dany ran around the class, read loudly: I can't sleep all the night. your appearance always.....All of them broke into laugh. After many rounds, dany felt tired and passed the diary to the other girl. and Agnes couldn't to continue her run. She sat down and cried. We consoled her. In a moment she said with perseverance:' My Jake will ask sister permission to meet me, as you see.'

It's the first love. You were inside . May be you forget it if it's not your first love. But I'm outside and I'm a little poet I'll describe:She sat disapointly and sob into her wet white handkerchief with embroidery{Because I can embroider a handkerchief}.How many tears has she cried over him?'The truth of art would have never been the absolute reality'{ Crownwell}Agnes is our leader so for someone you were nothing but for us you were an idole.May be you look like Christophe and we always take him for idole.. I don't like to tell you about this but it seems you're my brother, Charles and Bernard{ I don't remember exactly Bernard because I have never memories about him.}Now you know , for a long time I have taken you for an idole,so I will tell you a truth. Minh Uoc is not only a nickname but he's also a talent to discover many first lovers. He knows I cried all nights {to tell the truth I only cried some nights. When I met a man who didn't say any words.,I imagine he is a melancholy man , alone in the solitude and I ignore the way he speaks English in an evening class as an American.It's not necessary to emphasize his character..

Mr Grace is not related to you. It's a sign to identify who is Minh Uoc? Where did he live? I think it related to the boy in the casino whose family was attacked by theTpirates. It's in the last paragraph. A man of the authority should be a witness to the situation of all his relatives were treated as prostitues and sold as animals. The spiritual pain is more serious than the material pain. We Have Passed Six Years Together... He knows all things,My sister, My cry... all our secret .......I'll recall him about our teacher, Mr Grace, Mrs Cyrnos' friend's son.At the bottom of my heart I want know where he is ,in USA,in Canada , in France or in an island far away....It's seems he's a penpal of Minh Uoc.

Here are some ideas about my thinking to a brother that I have just recognized. If you really Jacques, could you correct for me a memory of the end of a Francophone cursus dated 2004. It will be useful for us.{ You can give me your adress in my email for sending this copy} .

Phuong Ninh