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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Dear Sir,

This letter serves to bring your attention to the fact that pole was placed for last 50 years ago in front of my house. My family and I have prayed for the pole connections, which was erected in front of our house in spite of our objections, to be reconnected opposite pole of my house. Our house is at Door No: 33-10-12, Karanala Street, Allipuram, Vizag -4. Pole Number 70A/11. Since the pole was placed in front of our house, we have been facing very many problems. One problem is that for further constructions and Another concern about it being near the house is that children and family members might accidentally touch the electrical wires. It is very dangerous for us. Please visit and see that the pole is life threatening. I request you to move the pole connections to opposite pole of my house. I already discussed this with the Assistant Engineer and ADE for Karanala Street, Allipuram, but they said it is not possible to connect to opposite pole.
I request for you to take action on this matter as soon as possible.

Repectfully,
Abhinaya.
  

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) pole was placed 50 years ago in front of my house. My family and I have prayed for the pole connections (This means you wanted the pole connections. ) , which was erected in front of our house in spite of our objections, to be reconnected to the pole that is placed across from my house.

  • ) pole was placed 50 years ago in front of my house.
  • My family and I have prayed for the pole connections (This means you wanted the pole connections.
  • ) , which was erected in front of our house in spite of our objections, to be reconnected to the pole that is placed across from my house.
  • Our house is at Door No: 33-10-12, Karanala Street, Allipuram, Vizag -4.
  • Pole Number 70A/11.
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This letter serves to bring your attention to the fact that (Put what kind of pole it is, Or use "a" before it.) pole was placed 50 years ago in front of my house. My family and I have prayed for the pole connections (This means you wanted the pole connections. Do you mean you wanted them, but not where they placed them?), whi

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