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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct this. I am not sure about the underlined part as what can come after a comma. Possibly intended to encourage someone going through the life of alcohol dependency.

The seed of doubt was (is?) planted in a person's mind and it grows taller every moment of the day until it reaches the height that one has no control over. The seed of doutbt when left to fester unharmpered can run amok and can affect every facet of your life until it has reigned over your life with nothing left but rubbles, but I believe God can raise you up eventhough yourlife has ended up as rubbles, put life back into it and make it living again.
  

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The seed of doubt is planted in a person's mind and it grows taller every moment of the day until it reaches a height that one has no control over. The seed of doubt when left to fester unhampered can run amok . It can affect every facet of your life until it has taken over your life and is nothing left but rubble.

  • The seed of doubt is planted in a person's mind and it grows taller every moment of the day until it reaches a height that one has no control over.
  • The seed of doubt when left to fester unhampered can run amok .
  • It can affect every facet of your life until it has taken over your life and is nothing left but rubble.
  • However, I believe *** can raise you up even though your life has ended up in ruin , put meaning back into your life, and make it worth living again .
  • *Is this better?
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The seed of doubt is planted in a person's mind and it grows taller every moment of the day until it reaches a height that one has no control over. The seed of doubt when left to fester unhampered can run amok. It can affect every facet of your life until it has taken over your life and is nothing left but rubble. However,
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AhelaumakaniThe seed of doubt is planted in a person's mind and it grows taller every moment of the day until it reaches a height that one has no control over. The seed of doubt when left to fester unhampered can run amok. It can affect every facet of your life until it has taken over your life and there is no

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