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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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I have heard many people saying that time is money and I agree with that to a great extent, although not totally. Now, I am in the middle age and I feel the passing of time has taken on more horse power and thus passes by more rapidly. The 24 hours of nowadays seems to be much less than that of a few years back. I see the effect of passing time not only in me but in others too. Each year seems to bring on few more wrinkes on my faces as well as on other people's faces. If you ask me whether I will pay for one more day, or perhaps one more month, of time, I am sure that I will say "yes" -- with one question remaining: how much?
  

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Very nicely composed. Some suggestions: I have heard many people say that time is money and I agree with that . Now I am in middle age , and I feel that time has taken on more horsepower and thus passes by more rapidly.

— Mister Micawber

  • Very nicely composed.
  • Some suggestions: I have heard many people say that time is money and I agree with that .
  • Now I am in middle age , and I feel that time has taken on more horsepower and thus passes by more rapidly.
  • The 24 hours of today seems much shorter than that of a few years ago .
  • I see the effect of passing time not only in me but in others too.
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Very nicely composed. Some suggestions:

I have heard many people say that time is money and I agree with that. Now I am in middle age, and I feel that time has taken on more horsepower and thus passes by more rapidly. The 24 hours of today seems much shorter than that of a few years ago. I see the effect
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