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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Hi, all.

I just wanted to know if all of you were going anywhere this weekend.

I haven't contacted all of you for a long time. Summer is here and this nasty sun seems really putting forth the heat day in and day out, non-stop, doesn't it? Anyway, I am sitting -- well, almost half-lying down -- on a sofa that is fast becoming sticky with the sweats, eventhough a fan is going full force.

It does seem easy to just let hours pass by without doing anything substantial -- and to me, that is not right. How about heading to XXX and hit the beach this weekend? I know a place that has a beautiful sandy beach with the sand that seems baby-soft to walk on. We can lie on the beach, basking under the sun or go to a nearby restaurant -- and it has a lot of restaurants just a step away from the beach -- and taste fresh seafood it is famous for.

I would say it's not a bad idea. Would you like to follow-up on my idea? If you would like to, please ring me up right away so I can go ahead and arrange our transportation.

I hope all of you stay cool.

(Is this sentence "I just wanted to know if all of you were going anywhere this weekend" correct tense-wise? I feel if you have the words "this weekend", it might be best to use the present tense.)
  

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Hi, all. I just wanted to know if any of you were going anywhere this weekend. I haven't contacted any of you for a long time.

  • Hi, all.
  • I just wanted to know if any of you were going anywhere this weekend.
  • I haven't contacted any of you for a long time.
  • Summer is here and this nasty sun seems to be really putting forth the heat day in and day out, non-stop, doesn't it?
  • Anyway, I am sitting -- well, almost half lying down -- on a sofa that is fast becoming sticky with sweat , even though a fan is going full force.
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Hi, all.

I just wanted to know if any of you were going anywhere this weekend.

I haven't contacted any of you for a long time. Summer is here and this nasty sun seems to be really putting forth the heat day in and day out, non-stop, doesn't it? Anyway, I am sitting -- well, almost half lying down -- on a sofa that is fast becoming sticky wit

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