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Believer Posted 18 years ago
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00Spring is here and has come like steps of an eager father bringing a gift to his loving son sleeping in his bed on Christmas eve -- tiptoeing ever so quietly trying not to wake his son up.. But spring nonethless has made through the door and along came sharp, yet low chirps of birds. This is the season in which people let the hardened muscles get loosened and try to move about in anticipation of something different, trying to make up for all those days they were stuck in their homes. 02br
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00Coming of spring has brought new work to be done too like fixing up old cracked walls and rearranging closets. Spring is a season is fluttering hearts but also is a season that bring new loads of age-old work.0-
  

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0 Christmas 01b 00Eve02b 02br 00 those days 01b 00during which/when02b 00 they were stuck in their homes. 02br 02br 00 Spring is a season01b 00 of 02b 00fluttering hearts 0-

  • 0 Christmas 01b 00Eve02b 02br 00 those days 01b 00during which/when02b 00 they were stuck in their homes.
  • 02br 02br 00 Spring is a season01b 00 of 02b 00fluttering hearts 0-
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0 Christmas 01b00Eve02b02br
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00 Spring is a season01b00 of 02b00fluttering hearts 0-

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