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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Welcoming introduction of our new executive:
I am proud to introduce to you Mr. Joe Brown who heralds from a prestigious institution in Seoul. He has extensive mangerial experience with various well-known both public and private institutions, the latest being a Vice-President in ZZZ International, which boasts 500 subsidiary companies all over the globe. As Senior Vice-President there, he helped the company in the following areas among many others:
1. Institute a centralized reporting system in which every employee is held accountable for his action,
2. helped to create performance-based pay system where each employee is to receive compensation based on his previous month's performance level
It is notable to mention that while he assumed that position for last three years, ZZZ International has sustained stellar double-digit growth every year. We are fortunate to have him as our new Senior Vice-President in charge of overall operation, and under his stewardship, I am sure we will be able to meet the hard challenges of today and forge ahead to record-setting years ahead.
Ladies and gentlemen, Here is Mr. Joe Brown. Let's give him a big hand.
I am proud to introduce to you Mr. Joe Brown who heralds from a prestigious institution in Seoul. He has extensive mangerial experience with various well-known both public and private institutions, the latest being a Vice-President in ZZZ International, which boasts 500 subsidiary companies all over the globe. As Senior Vice-President there, he helped the company in the following areas among many others:
1. Institute a centralized reporting system in which every employee is held accountable for his action,
2. helped to create performance-based pay system where each employee is to receive compensation based on his previous month's performance level
It is notable to mention that while he assumed that position for last three years, ZZZ International has sustained stellar double-digit growth every year. We are fortunate to have him as our new Senior Vice-President in charge of overall operation, and under his stewardship, I am sure we will be able to meet the hard challenges of today and forge ahead to record-setting years ahead.
Ladies and gentlemen, Here is Mr. Joe Brown. Let's give him a big hand.
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(assuming your company is not ZZZ INternational) I am proud to introduce to you Mr. Joe Brown who hails from a prestigious institution in Seoul. He has extensive mangerial experience with various well-known both public and private institutions, the latest being a Vice-President in ZZZ International, which boasts 500 subsidiary companies all over the globe.
- (assuming your company is not ZZZ INternational) I am proud to introduce to you Mr.
- Joe Brown who hails from a prestigious institution in Seoul.
- He has extensive mangerial experience with various well-known both public and private institutions, the latest being a Vice-President in ZZZ International, which boasts 500 subsidiary companies all over the globe.
- As Senior Vice-President there, he helped the company in the following areas among many others: 1.
- Instituting a centralized reporting system in which every employee was held accountable for his action, 2.
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(assuming your company is not ZZZ INternational)
I am proud to introduce to you Mr. Joe Brown who hails from a prestigious institution in Seoul. He has extensive mangerial experience with various well-knownboth public and private institutions, the latest being a Vice-President in ZZZ International, which boasts 500 subsidiary companies all over the globe. As Senior Vice-Presid
I am proud to introduce to you Mr. Joe Brown who hails from a prestigious institution in Seoul. He has extensive mangerial experience with various well-known
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