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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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please correct this

Presentation Summary:

During this presentation, I will try to show you how a child's study room arrangement can affect his or her school performance. You yourself might have experienced those frustrating long hours sitting in a clumsy chair with your reading material on the desk that didn't quite proportionally aligned right with the clumsy chair that squeaks, trying hard to finish up on your study for the next day's examination. Let us honestly ask ourselves how effective those long hours were? Would it have been better if you were sitting in a chair that fitted just right and supported your body well, and also, had a desk that aligned perfectly? How about the lighting? Have you ever squinted uncomfortably because of poor lighting? Could you have done better on your next day's examination if the lighting were better? If you will say 'yes' to those four questions, then I am sure you have already grasp the notion of how important quality furniture and its arrangement is (are??) to the study performance. If you are worrying about your kid's poor school performance, why not seriously consider attending this seminar and learn what you can do to help him to study more effectively which can possibly lead to better grades in school. In this presentation, I will give you detailed information as to enable you to put into action what you have learned right after the seminar. Handouts with useful diagrams will be given.
  

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Believer Presentation Summary: During this presentation, I will try to show you how a child's study room arrangement can affect his or her school performance. You yourself might have experienced those frustrating long hours sitting in a clumsy chair with your reading material on the desk that didn't quite proportionally aligned right with the clumsy chair that squeaks, trying hard to finish up on your study for the next day's examination. Let us honestly ask ourselves how effective those long hours were?

  • Believer Presentation Summary: During this presentation, I will try to show you how a child's study room arrangement can affect his or her school performance.
  • You yourself might have experienced those frustrating long hours sitting in a clumsy chair with your reading material on the desk that didn't quite proportionally aligned right with the clumsy chair that squeaks, trying hard to finish up on your study for the next day's examination.
  • Let us honestly ask ourselves how effective those long hours were?
  • Would it have been better if you were sitting in a chair that fitted just right and supported your body well, and also, had a desk that aligned perfectly?
  • How about the lighting?
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Believer
Presentation Summary:

During this presentation, I will try to show you how a child's study room arrangement can affect his or her school performance. You yourself might have experienced those frustrating long hours sitting in a clumsy chair with your reading material on the desk that didn't quite proportionally aligned right with the clumsy chair tha
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Thank you, Doll.

Thank you. It would have been better if you included some explanations though.
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1-... You yourself might have experienced those frustrating long hours sitting in a clumsy chair with your reading material on the desk that ..... Yourself is unnecessary here.

2-Let us honestly ask ourselves how effective those long hours were?... the place of honestly doesn't sound good to my ears.

3-...if you were sitting in a chair that fitted just right a

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