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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Hi,
This might be informal in style and nature, like an informal e-mail.
Hi, there all.
This is your President nudging you slightly in your rib with a notice that our bi-monthly meeting will be held this coming Friday, at 7 p.m., at the usual spot in Nono City. I hope you all are fine in midst of this sweltering heat. The weather seems to be gone out-of-control, isn't it? I hope you have your cool lemonade in your hand as you try to beat this heat.
This month's meeting will be a great one in that we are scheduled to have great John Doe from Vancouver, Canada, to talk to us about the Cultural Dependency Factor in the global age. He has written extensively on various cultures of the world and specifically, how different cultures might affect people living in different nations in this grobal age. I am sure you will enjoy listening to his well-reseached presentation on the topic. It will definitely be worth your trip to the meeting place.
I expect to see most of you there and have attached Mr. Joe Doe's bio (biography?) and his presentation summary.
As always, kudos for everyone. See you you at the meeting.
Yours truly,
Your President
This might be informal in style and nature, like an informal e-mail.
Hi, there all.
This is your President nudging you slightly in your rib with a notice that our bi-monthly meeting will be held this coming Friday, at 7 p.m., at the usual spot in Nono City. I hope you all are fine in midst of this sweltering heat. The weather seems to be gone out-of-control, isn't it? I hope you have your cool lemonade in your hand as you try to beat this heat.
This month's meeting will be a great one in that we are scheduled to have great John Doe from Vancouver, Canada, to talk to us about the Cultural Dependency Factor in the global age. He has written extensively on various cultures of the world and specifically, how different cultures might affect people living in different nations in this grobal age. I am sure you will enjoy listening to his well-reseached presentation on the topic. It will definitely be worth your trip to the meeting place.
I expect to see most of you there and have attached Mr. Joe Doe's bio (biography?) and his presentation summary.
As always, kudos for everyone. See you you at the meeting.
Yours truly,
Your President
Top answer
I think it's TOO informal for a president. m. at the usual spot - specify the location - new employees won't know this in Nono City.
- I think it's TOO informal for a president.
- m.
- at the usual spot - specify the location - new employees won't know this in Nono City.
- ] This month's - don't you meet every two months?
- Just say This meeting meeting will be a great one - omit - it sounds like he thinks the others are boring in that we are scheduled to have - this makes it sound like he's not sure he'll actually show up great John Doe from Vancouver, Canada, to talk to us about the Cultural Dependency Factor is there a reason this is capitalized?
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I think it's TOO informal for a president. I'd be thinking "Didn't he (or she) read this before signing this?"
Hello everyone,
Just a quick reminder that our bi-monthly meeting is this coming Friday- give the date - people may be reading this a different day than it's sent at 7 p.m. at the usual spot - specify the location - new employees won't know this in Nono City. [You're re
Hello everyone,
Just a quick reminder that our bi-monthly meeting is this coming Friday- give the date - people may be reading this a different day than it's sent at 7 p.m. at the usual spot - specify the location - new employees won't know this in Nono City. [You're re
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