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0Hi, please correct this fictitious account of how I lost my watch02br
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00Account of how I lost my watch in the subway:02br
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00It was Saturday of August 15th of last year. I was riding subway line 4, heading the Nono direction, in the early morning, around 8:30 a.m. I was carrying a rather heavy shoulder bag that had a heavy-duty nylon strap that held the bag securely on my right shoulder. I was in that subway line for twenty minutes when I felt a hand touching the bag, trying to unzip my bag. It was a movement that was made very stealthily, and it was the kind of touch that wasn't easily detectible; yet, the touch was palpable to me. Then, I proceeded to look to the side where the touch seemed to came from, trying to see who was touching my bag. Surprisingly, I didn't see anyone. "Maybe I was imagining this," I thought and proceeded to go on with my travel. Then, about fifteen minutes later, again, I barely felt another touch on my bag, but since I was talking intensely with a gentleman standing next to me, I didn't bother to me. Then a few minutes later, I got off at Nono station and headed for Exit 1. Feeling the need to go to the bathroom, I got into the bathroom in the station. When I was looking at the mirror to check my face, I saw my bag with the zipper open at some length. Right away, I looked into the bag and found my watch missing. 0-