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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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00Welcome everyone. It is my pleasure to have all you friends, relatives and distinguished guests for my birthday party. As someone has said in the past I am sure, if a man's life can be judged, which I do not wholeheartly believe, by the number of friends he has, then I am sure I have lead a pretty good life so far. You might wonder what I wholeheartly believe and what that is that the only barometer by which a man's life can be judged is how pleasing his life has been to the eyes of the Lord. Thank you all for being here once again. Please enjoy the meal. I hope that you all signed your names in the guest register and will attend all the events that are planned here for my birthday. 0-
  

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0I made some alterations02br 02br 00Welcome everyone. It is with great pleasure to have you all, friends, relatives, and distinguished guests for my birthday party. Someone said in the past, if a man's life can be judged by the number of friends they have, which I do not wholeheartly believe, then I am sure I have had a good innings.

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  • 0I made some alterations02br 02br 00Welcome everyone.
  • It is with great pleasure to have you all, friends, relatives, and distinguished guests for my birthday party.
  • Someone said in the past, if a man's life can be judged by the number of friends they have, which I do not wholeheartly believe, then I am sure I have had a good innings.
  • You might wonder what I wholeheartly believe.
  • To me, the only possible gauge of success of a man's life is whether *** thinks they took the path he expected them to.
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