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Believer Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

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00Let us say that I am trying to write the order of things to be happening on the day of a school commencement.02br
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00Order of the Day02br
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001. Delivery of Welcoming Address by Class Representative (or just, "Welcoming Address by the Class Representative"??)02br
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002. Salutation (or Salute to the flag??)02br
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003. Commencement Address by Principal (or Commencement Address by the Principal??)02br
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004. Presentation of Awards and Certificates of Achievements02br
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005. Delivery of closing remark by representative (or "Delivery of the closing remark by the representative)I02br
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00What I am confused about is how to word these things so they are all aligned structually and also how to deal with articles (whether to omit them in the middle or in the end of each phrase).0-
  

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02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01font 00Order of the Day02font 02br 02br 01font 001. Welcoming Address by Class Representative02font 02br 02br 01font 002. Salute to flag02font 02br 02br 01font 003.

  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive02br 02br 01font 00Order of the Day02font 02br 02br 01font 001.
  • Welcoming Address by Class Representative02font 02br 02br 01font 002.
  • Salute to flag02font 02br 02br 01font 003.
  • Commencement Address by Principal 02font 02br 02br 01font 004.
  • Presentation of Awards and Certificates of Achievement02font 02br 02br 01font 005.
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0Hi,02br
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00It's point form, so articles can be omitted.02br
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00Decide whether to start each point with a verb or a noun, and be consistent.02br
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00Best wishes, Clive02br
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01font00Order of the Day02font02br
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01cite10Clive12cite10Hi,12br
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10It's point form, so articles can be omitted. 10Can the articles be omitted pretty much all through out each phrase on the list? (See the articles omitted in parentheses.) I think GG kind of insinuated that only the omission of the articles for the beginning part of each phrase i
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1font00Hi,02font02br
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00It's point form, so articles can be omitted. 00Can the articles be omitted pretty much all through out each phrase on the list?01font00 Yes. 02font00(See the articles omitted in parentheses.) I think GG kind of insinuated that only the omission of the articles fo

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