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Believer Posted 19 years ago
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00He has short, well-kept hair, which seems to be greased and styled to perfection. The light is reflecting over his fine hair just the right amount to give that chic, shiny look. He has thick black eyebrows that are slanted downward. He has slightly big eyes with both pupils aligned to one side of the eyes. He has a long pointed nose that looks to be pointed downward. He has a medium-size mouth with pretty full red lips. He has somewhat big ears that look like an elf's. He has a fine complexion with no moles, pimples or ugly spots. 0-
  

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0He has short, well-kept hair, 01del 00which seems to be 02del 00greased and styled to perfection. 01b 00His 01i 00fine02i 00 hair reflects the light02b 00 just the right amount to give that chic, shiny look. He has thick01b 01i 00, 02i 02b 00black01b 00, downward-slanting02b 00 eyebrows .

  • 0He has short, well-kept hair, 01del 00which seems to be 02del 00greased and styled to perfection.
  • 01b 00His 01i 00fine02i 00 hair reflects the light02b 00 just the right amount to give that chic, shiny look.
  • He has thick01b 01i 00, 02i 02b 00black01b 00, downward-slanting02b 00 eyebrows .
  • He has 00slightly big00 eyes with 00both pupils aligned to one side of the eyes00.
  • He has a long01b 00,02b 00 pointed nose that looks to be 00pointed downward00.
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0He has short, well-kept hair, 01del00which seems to be 02del00greased and styled to perfection. 01b00His 01i00fine02i00 hair reflects the light02b00 just the right amount to give that chic, shiny look. He has thick01b01i00, 02i02b00black01b00, downward-slanting02b0
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1font00"Fine hair" describes the relative thickness of the strands of hair, not the amount on the head. A person can have a full head of very "fine" hair. I know: I 01u00used to be02u00of that sort, and I had to use lots of hairspray to keep it in line; age has taken care of that need. 05002font02br
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0 hi there, i was wondering what does this paragraph belong to? i mean what sort of essay eg. a narrative, cause and effect...etc. 0-
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0Thank you.02br
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00Is it a "No-no" to repeated a word or phrase more than once in his/her writing? Is that partly because it is aesthetically not palatable?0-
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01cite10Believer12cite12br
10Thank you.12br
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10Is it a "No-no" to repeated a word or phrase more than once in his/her writing? Is that partly because it is aesthetically not palatable?12br
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11font00No, it is not a no-no. However, repetition

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