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Slacker11 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Please correct theses thematic sentences



I dont believe in God existence. Why? I don't know, I just think He doesn't exist. Well, I'd like to see someone proofing God existence by using reason instead of emotion. There's no "real" historical fact that can proof that Jesus wasn't a simple man, I think most of people need something to belive in. The people's emotiotional state can do anything that they can imagine. How can one be sure if this thing isn't only in people's mind? I think this is only a emotional state, mostly weekness. Tell me, Are you afraid of God's judgement? I think so. As a child gets older, he gets this feeling stronger. Everyone should dare of thinking of this: If it is only a story, the biggest story ever, the biggest lie ever told?!

So, what do you think?

Thank you in advance for your time.
  

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Here is a try: Slacker11 I don't believe in *** 's existence. Why? I don't know, I just think he doesn't exist.

— Akavall

  • Here is a try: Slacker11 I don't believe in *** 's existence.
  • Why?
  • I don't know, I just think he doesn't exist.
  • Well, I'd like to see someone proving *** 's existence by using reason instead of emotion.
  • There's no "real" historical fact that can prove that Jesus wasn't a simple man .
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Here is a try:
Slacker11

I don't believe in ***'s existence. Why? I don't know, I just think he doesn't exist. Well, I'd like to see someone proving ***'s existence by using reason instead of emoti
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Thank you very much, but why "prove" instead of "proof"? As I know, to proof is a verb, isn't it?

Thanks.
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"Proof" can be a verb, but it doesn't have the meaning that you want.

"v., proofed, proof·ing, proofs.


v.tr.

  1. Printing.
    1. To make a trial impression of (printed or engraved matter).
    2. To proofread (copy).
    1. To activate (dormant dry yeast) by adding water.
    2. To work (dough) into proper
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