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SHD Posted 17 years ago
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Please correct these sentences
As you are aware, I have sent a requisition of my proposal for salary increment for the maintenance staff in last month as per our discussion held on xxxxx. Everyone expected that it would have approved along with this monthly salary, but they only received the same salary without any increment. Since I don't have any response from you, I would like to remind you once again that please look into the matter and kindly do the needful. The details of my proposal for the maintenance staff as follows.
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Wow, your message sounds quite tough, even angry. Is this intended? Anyway, try: As you are aware, I sent my proposal for salary increment for the maintenance staff last month, as per our discussion held on ***.
- Wow, your message sounds quite tough, even angry.
- Is this intended?
- Anyway, try: As you are aware, I sent my proposal for salary increment for the maintenance staff last month, as per our discussion held on ***.
- Everyone expected that it would have approved and will see the increment in this monthly salary, but they only received the same salary without any increment.
- Since I do not have any response from you, I would like to remind you once again to please look into the matter and kindly do what is required.
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Wow, your message sounds quite tough, even angry. Is this intended? Anyway, try:
As you are aware, I sent my proposal for salary increment for the maintenance staff last month, as per our discussion held on ***. Everyone expected that it would have approved and will see the increment in this monthly salary, but they only received the same salary without any increment. Since I do not have
As you are aware, I sent my proposal for salary increment for the maintenance staff last month, as per our discussion held on ***. Everyone expected that it would have approved and will see the increment in this monthly salary, but they only received the same salary without any increment. Since I do not have
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Can I write as follows. I changded the mood of the sentences, please check and correct
As you are aware, I have sent my proposal for salary revision of maintenance staff for last month. Everyone had expected that the requested salary revision would have been approved along with the last month's salary. We have yet to receive any response from you in this regard. Kindly consider this mail
As you are aware, I have sent my proposal for salary revision of maintenance staff for last month. Everyone had expected that the requested salary revision would have been approved along with the last month's salary. We have yet to receive any response from you in this regard. Kindly consider this mail
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