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Sundarnaz Posted 14 years ago
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please correct these lines.

Let me tell u if I am alive even after your fascinating promises reason behind is that I deemed them fake. I would surly die of excess joy if i would consider them true.
  

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sundarnaz Let me tell u if I am alive even after your fascinating promises reason behind is that I deemed them fake. I would surly die of excess joy if i would consider them true. The first sentence is extremely vague - I'm not sure what you mean.

— Philip

  • sundarnaz Let me tell u if I am alive even after your fascinating promises reason behind is that I deemed them fake.
  • I would surly die of excess joy if i would consider them true.
  • The first sentence is extremely vague - I'm not sure what you mean.
  • Can you try rephrasing it?
  • I would sur e ly die of excess joy if you consider ed them true.
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sundarnaz Let me tell u if I am alive even after your fascinating promises reason behind is that I deemed them fake. I would surly die of excess joy if i would consider them true.
The first sentence is extremely vague - I'm not sure what you mean. Can you try rephrasing it?

I would surely die of excess joy if you considered them true.
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thank you for your kind reply. 1st of all both the sentences are expressing a single main idea. i would try to explain it so that u could tell me the correct English. look! if someone promise you that he or she will never leave you alone but he or she does against his or her promise. and now you want to tell him or her that you considered his or her promise as fake at the very beginning and you wo
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I have suddenly gotten an idea I can say I knew that your fascinating promises were fake I would surely die of excess joy if I considered them true. does it make sense now?
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