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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Today i'm gonna show you one of my favorite food and I'm sure you also like it.. It's ice-cream. people enjoy ice-cream thousand years ago, and nowadays, it spreads all over the world, even on the ISS, too.

ice-cream is not only easy to make or eat but also has some advantage;

the first thing is ice-cream is a source of energy, keeps your brain active and reduces stress. Because it contains carbohydrate, fat and protein. So if you need energy, let get some ice-cream.

the other thing is ice-cream is a source of vitamin and mineral: vitamin A, D, C as well as calcium and phosphorus are good for your bones.

you can buy ice-cream anywhere, anytime, especially on summer, and you can eat with a lots of flavors such as chocolate, strawberry, green-tea or vanilla. there are many types to enjoy from soft ice-cream to frozen ice-cream. But, remember that ice-cream is made from milk, sugar and cream, so don't eat too much. It's hard for you to digest.

Thank you
  

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Anonymous show you one of my favorite Are you just giving a talk or actually showing them an ice-cream? Anonymous ISS Do you mean the International Space Station?

  • Anonymous show you one of my favorite Are you just giving a talk or actually showing them an ice-cream?
  • Anonymous ISS Do you mean the International Space Station?
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Anonymousshow you one of my favorite
Are you just giving a talk or actually showing them an ice-cream?
AnonymousISS
Do you mean the International Space Station?
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I'm just giving a talk on class
yes, ISS means the International Space Station. That's what i mean.
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and i'm gonna show them a picture of ice-cream

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