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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Please correct these.
Hi. Please correct these sentences. Some conerns of mine are noted in parentheses.
1. The topic today (for today - OK?) is how to make it in life, according to me.
2. That's John Doe (comm here?) using the computer.
3. The first player calls out one word, the second player two, the next three, and so on, around the class.
4. They will be disqualified if they (a) are unable to come up with a noun (word); (b) use a noun (word) that was used previsously; (c) come up with a word that is other than a noun.
5. He is considered a genius; John Doe, a not-so-smart person.
5. If you had to live again, would you lead the same type of lifestyle you have lead so far?
6. What do you like about your friend, John Doe? Be specific.
1. The topic today (for today - OK?) is how to make it in life, according to me.
2. That's John Doe (comm here?) using the computer.
3. The first player calls out one word, the second player two, the next three, and so on, around the class.
4. They will be disqualified if they (a) are unable to come up with a noun (word); (b) use a noun (word) that was used previsously; (c) come up with a word that is other than a noun.
5. He is considered a genius; John Doe, a not-so-smart person.
5. If you had to live again, would you lead the same type of lifestyle you have lead so far?
6. What do you like about your friend, John Doe? Be specific.
Top answer
1. The topic today (for today - OK? Yes.
- 1.
- The topic today (for today - OK?
- Yes.
- ) is how to make it in life, according to me.
- Better: The topic (for) today is my view of how to make it in life.
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1. The topic today (for today - OK? Yes.) is how to make it in life, according to me.
Better: The topic (for) today is my view of how to make it in life.
2. That's John Doe (comma here? No.) using the computer.
Better: The topic (for) today is my view of how to make it in life.
2. That's John Doe (comma here? No.) using the computer.
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