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Lcchang Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please correct the short writing of mine.
What has been on my mind
Well there is actually not a lot on my mind. It is just that my son really pisses me off sometimes. First I think he is neither like my wife nor like me who always keep ourselves active in things we are working on. In stead, he always lacks ambitions to care about stuff around him, yet which can be for the well-being of him. Moreover, it appears that things like watching TV and playing on-line games can only provoke his interest. At times I feel so frustrated being his old man, and I am hoping that he really could think about how to improve his life as well as school studies.
Well there is actually not a lot on my mind. It is just that my son really pisses me off sometimes. First I think he is neither like my wife nor like me who always keep ourselves active in things we are working on. In stead, he always lacks ambitions to care about stuff around him, yet which can be for the well-being of him. Moreover, it appears that things like watching TV and playing on-line games can only provoke his interest. At times I feel so frustrated being his old man, and I am hoping that he really could think about how to improve his life as well as school studies.
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Hi, Here are a few edits. What has been on my mind Well, there is actually not a lot on my mind. It is just that my son really ****** <<< this marks this as very informal writing - and even informally, note that this term offends quite a lot of people me off sometimes.
- Hi, Here are a few edits.
- What has been on my mind Well, there is actually not a lot on my mind.
- It is just that my son really ****** <<< this marks this as very informal writing - and even informally, note that this term offends quite a lot of people me off sometimes.
- First, I think he is neither like my wife nor like me.
- We always keep ourselves active in things we are working on.
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Hi,
Here are a few edits.
What has been on my mind
Well, there is actually not a lot on my mind. It is just that my son really ****** <<< this marks this as very informal writing - and even informally, note that this term offends quite a lot of people me off sometimes. First,
Here are a few edits.
What has been on my mind
Well, there is actually not a lot on my mind. It is just that my son really ****** <<< this marks this as very informal writing - and even informally, note that this term offends quite a lot of people me off sometimes. First,
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Thanks Clive, but my son really ****** me off sometimes. I know I wouldn't say this to others. Nice day.
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