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Sknew Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Please Correct the sentences

1. Consider my total year of experience as well as my performance in this project for the past 4.5 years, Kindly acknowledge my effort and highly requesting for promotion this time.

2. Would like to face challenges and changes that would help me in gaining new opportunities. Readily looking forward for onsite opportunities, Please initiate visa processing of mine.
  

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sknew 1. Consider my total year of experience Do you have only one year of experience? sknew years, Kindly A comma is not correct at the end of a sentence.

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  • sknew 1.
  • Consider my total year of experience Do you have only one year of experience?
  • sknew years, Kindly A comma is not correct at the end of a sentence.
  • sknew and highly requesting for promotion this time.
  • This is ungrammatical.
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sknew1. Consider my total year of experience
Do you have only one year of experience?
sknewyears, Kindly
A comma is not correct at the end of a sentence.
sknewand highly requesting for promotion this time.
This is ungrammatical.
Please approve my request for a promotion.
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sknew 1. Considering my total many years of experience as well as my performance in this project for the past four and a half 4.5 years, I believe that I'm entitled for a promotion at this stage. Kindly acknowledge my effort and highly requesting for promotion this time.
I think what you're tr
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