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Achucoul Posted 11 years ago
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1) Visit to ABC company: I met the quality team members. They said there is a rejection rate of 1.5% of our products. When they use their existing tool to cut our metal part, It does not get cut on the desired area. The quality department head asked me to send the material test report; So that he can check the parameters and get back to us soon.
2) Visit to Lincoln Electric Company: I met the receptionist and she informed that Mr. Keyhani is the person who is looking after purchasing. She gave me his email id and she asked me to send our company profile to his email address. If there is a need for our products, he will get back to us. Our company profile will be send immediately to Mr. Keyhani's email address.
3) Visit to SS corporation: SS corporation is one of the finest sheet metal fabricators in Germany who supplies their products to Schneider electric, ABB, GE healthcare, etc. They are buying rivets from various source. I explained about the cost advantages of our rivets; Mr. Raja is the person who is heading production department said that he will be sending us the list of rivets what they are buying from various source. We must have to choose our own equivalent rivets and submit our offer. If our prices are lower than the competition, future orders will be placed on us.
2) Visit to Lincoln Electric Company: I met the receptionist and she informed that Mr. Keyhani is the person who is looking after purchasing. She gave me his email id and she asked me to send our company profile to his email address. If there is a need for our products, he will get back to us. Our company profile will be send immediately to Mr. Keyhani's email address.
3) Visit to SS corporation: SS corporation is one of the finest sheet metal fabricators in Germany who supplies their products to Schneider electric, ABB, GE healthcare, etc. They are buying rivets from various source. I explained about the cost advantages of our rivets; Mr. Raja is the person who is heading production department said that he will be sending us the list of rivets what they are buying from various source. We must have to choose our own equivalent rivets and submit our offer. If our prices are lower than the competition, future orders will be placed on us.
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1) Visit to ABC company: I met the quality team members. 5% for our products. When they use their existing tool s to cut our metal part s , It does not get cut on the desired area to their specifications .
- 1) Visit to ABC company: I met the quality team members.
- 5% for our products.
- When they use their existing tool s to cut our metal part s , It does not get cut on the desired area to their specifications .
- The quality department head asked me to send the material test report; So that he can check the parameters and get back to us soon.
- 2) Visit to Lincoln Electric Company: I met the receptionist and she informed that Mr.
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1) Visit to ABC company: I met the quality team members. They said there is a rejection rate of 1.5% for our products. When they use their existing tools to cut our metal parts, It does not get cut on the desired area to their specifications. The quality department head asked me to send the material test report; So that he can check the parameters
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