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Buranda Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

Please correct the sentence

Hi,

please consider the following sentence:

You can download the file on http:// www.example.com after having your user account and media registered.

I think it is fine to say the sentence above but I want to know how native speakers say naturally.
Could you please improve this sentence please?
  

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com after having your user account and media registered. com after registering your user account and media.

— Mister Micawber

  • com after having your user account and media registered.
  • com after registering your user account and media.
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burandaYou can download the file on http:// www.example.com after having your user account and media registered.
I would just change the last clause to active voice:

You can download the file on http:// www.example.com after registering your user account and media.
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I would say ' . . . download the file from . . . '

Clive
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