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Mahshid1353 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please correct the paragraph.

Systematized work of epidemiologist and health net work very soon determined the source of contamination, which was contaminated water of a tanker truck providing non drinkable water for farms that locals had used it to wash their vegetables and fruits. By efforts of health net work and city hall officials the water supply was provided from an uncontaminated source and in next few days we were visiting less number of patients and spending more time educating residents of the village about prevention. I was amazed to see how effective presence of an epidemiologist in an epidemic could be.
  

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Hi mahshid; Here are some suggestions:

Systematized (systematic) work of epidemiologists and the health net workers(? is health net an organization?) very soon determined the source of contamination, which was contaminated water from of a tanker truck providing non drinkable (nonpotable) water for farm
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